Date: Sep 08, 2009 10:18 pm Title: The story!
I liked that Arthur resorted to carrying Merlin and riding away from the others. Desperate times call for desperate measures. ;) Possessive!Arthur never gets old. :) Loved Arthur's POV in this. Merlin's POV to this story would be nice.
Date: Mar 31, 2009 03:30 am Title: The story!
I think Merlin and BtVS's Xander could start a support group for love spell's run amok. ;-)
Jealous!Arthur is amusing. I would like to see a companion piece in Merlin's P.O.V. as you mentioned. I have a sneaking suspicion that Merlin might have accidently caused the problem while trying a unknown spell or trying a spell to see if Arthur loved him. I don't think he'd try to use a spell to deliberately make Arthur love him.
Date: Mar 19, 2009 04:29 pm Title: The story!
That was brilliant! I absolutely adored it!! 10/10!!!
for the companion piece I pick YES!
Would it be rude if i asked if you could take a look at some of my Merlin/Arthur fics? i would really apreciate it as no-one has reviewed them yet.. :)
Date: Feb 25, 2009 10:24 pm Title: The story!
Okay, first I gotta slightly chastise you for the ludicrous idea for a spell that got this story rolling. While that was slightly groan-worthy, Uther is downright DO NOT WANT, creepy. I'm not complaining too much about the ridiculous spell, but only because it gave the necessary playground for the *fantastic* Arthur-finally-gets-a-clue story.
He's too cute for words, and his actions and reactions in this fic are priceless.
Also, you're a God for this line: "I’ve been practicing walking on my knees." I've been waiting to see that since I saw the damned episode. Thank you!
One tiny suggestion I'll make is to move the "* Because they have to exist, right?" footnote to the very end of the fic. Where it is now is still quite far from its placement in the story. Another few paragraphs down won't hurt it. You don't want to distract readers out of the story when you're that close to the finish line.
Companion piece: Yes!
Date: Dec 27, 2008 10:11 am Title: The story!
I don't know how to circle the yes, but consider it circled!
Lovely! Very realistic ending, I think, too, that everyone really doesn't think they've been behaving in any way different from normal.
One thing: there could have been a lot more sex, but maybe that's just me ... :)
Date: Dec 27, 2008 05:13 am Title: The story!
And here I thought everyone at Camelot were trying to push those two together. Silly me xD. Great piece, I'd love to circle a yes on Merlin's opinion. And keep up the good work, because possessive!Arthur is just soo funny and scorching hawt!