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Reviewer: merlinslover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Brillant and Well Done. I Hope Merlin Does Get A Better Door. Please Check Out My Merlin And Arthur Story Which Is Called Dancing Queen.

Reviewer: merlinslover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2011 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Please Read and Review My Story Called Brother and Sister. I hope you will like My Story Just as Much As I like your Awesome Stories.

Reviewer: nitestorm Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2009 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute

Reviewer: tolstoy Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2009 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Could do with a little characterization improvement but..amusing..

Reviewer: catscratch Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2009 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1

This story was a neat little idea. I do wish you'd said exactly what your writing prompt was. I liked Merlin contemplating the nature of his door. The line that "Merlin may as well knock down the entire wall to save Arthur the time" was amusing. I got a smile outta that one.

There is something in here that could be improved. The problem with drabbles is that if there's a problem in the story or writing it's that much harder to ignore because there isn't enough good stuff to outweigh it. The last line from Arthur strikes me as OOC. Do you really think Arthur would say: "Princes don’t have to take baths or have bedtimes and shit." Especially after he's just declared himself to be a man? Admittedly, Arthur isn't the most mature of princes, be he isn't a bratty child either. (And I doubt Uther'd let him out too late anyway.) This small fic would be a lot better if it weren't for the last line.

Reviewer: devilboy Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2008 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

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"Princes don’t have to take baths or have bedtimes and shit.”
yeah really in character...

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