Date: Mar 21, 2009 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This story was a neat little idea. I do wish you'd said exactly what your writing prompt was. I liked Merlin contemplating the nature of his door. The line that "Merlin may as well knock down the entire wall to save Arthur the time" was amusing. I got a smile outta that one.
There is something in here that could be improved. The problem with drabbles is that if there's a problem in the story or writing it's that much harder to ignore because there isn't enough good stuff to outweigh it. The last line from Arthur strikes me as OOC. Do you really think Arthur would say: "Princes don’t have to take baths or have bedtimes and shit." Especially after he's just declared himself to be a man? Admittedly, Arthur isn't the most mature of princes, be he isn't a bratty child either. (And I doubt Uther'd let him out too late anyway.) This small fic would be a lot better if it weren't for the last line.