Date: Dec 30, 2012 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved the piece but I'm not 100% sure on the why. Are Arthur and Gwen married but Arthur can't produce an heir for some reason so Merlin is basically acting as a sperm donor? Like I said I loved the piece and the emotion within the characters definitely came out to the forefront for me. Great work.
Date: Jul 22, 2011 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Many Thanks for Reviewing My Story and giving Your Comments. English is the Langauge is Speak because I was born In England. Your Very Kind And Very Helpfull. I hope your Story Will Continue?And I Hope You Will Reply To My Review?.