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Reviewer: merlinslover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2011 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Are you going to write a story about the faults of another charactor?.
Perhaps Arthur could write A List of Merlin's Faults?. Its Just A Idea Of Mine That I Hope You Will Turn Into A Story Please?.

Please Read Review and Rate My Story Called Her Destiny.

Reviewer: catscratch Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2009 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Ah, I keep running across this drabble and then forgetting to review, although I certainly haven't minded rereading it a few times. :)

I quite like this story. It's very sweet how Merlin tries to keep reminding himself of Arthur's faults but at the end of the day it all just comes down to a matter of caring for him anyway. Well done, and well written.

I've a small suggestion for the formatting of this that might help. If you add some line breaks between the different thoughts Merlin goes through, it'll give the reader the time to better digest each part. Make this drabble in four tiny parts instead of one big chunk and it'll improve the flow of it without ever having changed a word. Blank space is important; use it liberally just as in a resume to draw the reader's eye to different ideas. Thanks for sharing this drabble. :)

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