Date: Dec 27, 2009 10:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Nice one.:-)I hope there's more to come.Keep up with the good work.:-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm happy you liked it. *hugs* There is a sequel to the story already posted called "Rediscovering Magic" :)
Date: Nov 05, 2009 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Did you chicken out of trying to think of a way Merlin can actually give birth to it? lol. I can't say I blame you, if you did. That's deffinetely a conundrum, but it was still a great story and certainly an interesting concept! I have to say though, I really love the idea of the future heir of Camelot being the creation of both Arthur and Merlin! >.< That's so sweet! he he
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) I actually did write about Merlin giving birth in the sequel "Rediscovering Magic." You can check it out if you like; it's on this site. Thanks again!
Date: Nov 05, 2009 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
No way! Is Merlin seriously pregnant!? How one earth does that even work? Where's the womb? Hows he going to give birth? I don't think they did cesearen's back then, did they? lol, Wow. Well that was certainly an interesting suprise. Got to say, I love his mood swings though! he he. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you thought the pregnancy was an interesting plot line. Merlin's mood swings were fun to write and I'm happy you liked that part! :) Thanks!
Date: Nov 05, 2009 11:47 am Title: Chapter 2
I almost can't imagine Merlin dressing up in fancy clothes. Does he even own nicer clothes!? lol. But I like the idea of it all the same. The fact that he tried to make Arthur admit that he had feelings for him. I almost wish that we'd been able to see more of it. Oh well, it was still a great chapter! And I'm really looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I agree with you that it would have been nice to see more scenes of their blossoming romance. I'm glad you still enjoyed the chapter :)
Date: Nov 05, 2009 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo *claps* Great first chapter! I wonder if the fruit is going to have a particular affect on Merlin and what that effect will be considering he was meant to be creating life. Hmm.. anyway, I can't wait to find out! Very nicely written so far.
Date: Sep 21, 2009 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
The ending is beautiful. I do sometimes wish there might be a mini-sequel. Just a quick preview into the aftermath of it all.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a nice comment! You've put a big smile on my face :) There is a sequel to the story called "Rediscovering Magic" that you can find on this site or at my Livejournal--> http://sagarian.livejournal.com/33153.html
Date: Jul 11, 2009 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this when I read it like a week or so ago. It was so cute I just wanted to *squee*. I don't know what that means, just that it made me all bubbly and happy. I also read the sequel to this too, which was amazing! Though I do think you should continue on anyways, because it was just so great. I think I'm going to read it again now, because it was just soooo awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much for this wonderful review! It has totally made my day :) I really am happy that you liked it and it made you bubbly! Yay! There is actually a third part that is not necessarily a sequel, but it kind of exists in the same universe. It's not as sweet and cute as the first two, but it does have a happy ending. You can find it here if you're interested: http://sagarian.livejournal.com/35463.html Thanks again for reading and reviewing! You're the best! *hugs*
Date: Mar 31, 2009 01:03 am Title: Chapter 5
I love the smoldering heat between Merlin and Arthur. And the scene with the magic fruit compelling Merlin to visit Arthur's bedchamber wherein they both give in to their desires was hot.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I liked that scene, too. The sexual tension had been building up to it and the fruit finally kicked down the door. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Mar 13, 2009 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really really loved this :D
Uh did I say I loved it ;)
You wrote a beautiful and touching tale *hugs*
Author's Response: Your words are too kind! I did a little dance when I read them! Thank you so much for taking the time to review. *hugs back*
Date: Mar 13, 2009 08:19 am Title: Chapter 5
You will write a sequel, right? ç///ç Please, pretty please! This story is awesome: Arthur is too sweet and Merlin... little, cute mama Merlin. Too beautiful! Please continue this story. I need to know if the baby will be a prince or a princess and, above all, what Uther and Gaius and Morgana are going to do. You're a great writer!
Author's Response: Awww, you're so sweet! Thanks for reading and reviewing. It made my day to check my email and see that I had a review waiting for me. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This story almost came to me in a dream and I worked on it obsessively until it was done. If I get another flash of inspiration like that, I will definitely write a sequel. My problem is, I could never start on a story unless I know exactly how it should begin and end and have an idea of all the little details in between. Anyway, thanks again!