Date: Mar 13, 2014 12:46 pm Title: Epilogue
This was so well-written and mind-grabbing. When I started reading it, I couldn't exit it. What is Arthur gonna do? Are Merlin's symptoms because he's MAGIC? Will Arthur leave Merlin behind while he returns as per the request of the king?
So many questions and hopes flitted through my mind, great job with that. Not once was I bored.
I especially love how you used Arthur's determination and Uther's need to have an heir (in addition to any father's love of their child) used against the king, yet for him, causing him to change himself slightly to accomodate Merlin's existence.
I like his "I can't change the laws for one boy." when confronted on Merlin and Athur's love for each other, and how you used his memories of Ygraine and his love for her turn him around.
Basically great Uther-development, not very many people use him as a main character WELL, you're the best I've seen.
Keep writing and supporting our fandom!
Date: Jul 17, 2011 02:00 pm Title: Epilogue
Demon Faith are you going to Continue the Story Please?. I have Written A Story Called Merlin's Sister in Camelot. I have Watched A Lot of Merlin on telly and on DVD. So I have got Lots of Ideas to add More Chapters to My Story. I hope you will Respond to My Review?and I hope you will Read My Story as Well Please?.
Date: Nov 05, 2009 02:53 am Title: Chapter 12
It's the jewerly isn't it. It has to be! I love the way Merlin has flashes of stability and life when Arthur touches him. That's very sweet. Anyway, great chapter! I hope Arthur can get Merlin back to normal soon. They've never yet had a happy time then when in the woods away from it all.
Date: Nov 05, 2009 02:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Hmm... I wonder if those gold braclets are like the ones in Aladin. Oh that's so horrid if they are. Surely he can just take them off again when Uthers dead though, right? lol. Anyway, great chapter! I'm glad everything turne dout alright.
Date: Nov 05, 2009 02:33 am Title: Chapter 10
Unless he's going to whitness Merlin's death!? *gasps* lol. Only Arthur would think of starving himself to save someone else. So terribly stupid and bave. *rolls eyes* he he. Anyway, great chaper! I hope things turn well soon.
Date: Nov 05, 2009 02:25 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh poor Merlin, he soudns in terrible shape! I liked the whole mind connection thing though, taht was a nice touch. Now Arthur has to save Merlin again, bless him. lol. Why couldn't Merlin just disguise himself as a woman, taht woudl have been hilarious! he he. Anyway, great chapter!
Date: Nov 04, 2009 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh dear, where will it end! Surely they can't possibly be threatened with execution again? And what did Uther tell Arther about Merlin? He already knows the most damning thing about him, surely? Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Date: Nov 04, 2009 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
But but but, they've gotten so far! They must be walking miles and miles and miles! Aww that's so unfair! lol. What baout keeping house? I wanted to see Arthur try and make a pie... lol. Oh well, it was still a great chapter! And I'm deffinetely curious as to what Uther wants. Unless it's jst to try and convince Arthur to return... hmm...
Date: Nov 04, 2009 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awww I love how Arthur reacted at the end. How he needed a minute to recouperate, that he'd never felt so strongly about someone. Very sweet! I can't wait to see them start this new life in one of the villages that they're talking about. Now *that* should be interesting! lol. Great chapter!
Date: Nov 04, 2009 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, now they're banished!? It's one thing after another with those two! I can't wait to see how they cope being banished though... especially Arthur. I'm sure there's going to be some bumps in that particular road! he eh. Anyway, great chapter!
Date: Nov 04, 2009 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, never imagined traht they'd blame Merlin but I guess it makes sense. Now I have to wonder why Merlin didn't do this spell before? I thought he was trying to heal him with magic the whole time... unless this is a 'last resort' sort of spell? lol. Anyway, great chapter!
Date: Jun 28, 2009 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Ending was 'inadequate' to say the least , -too much was left unresolved-but the plot and story flow was good and original with unexpected twists.(I love the fact that you mentioned and explained Merlin's parentage.)
Date: Jun 25, 2009 05:27 am Title: Epilogue
This story is so real!
I'm really really happy that everything can turn out very nice. What an amazing story.
Arthur and Merlin are so damn cute when they care about each other. How adorable!!
It's still not actually complete in my feeling but they were together without Uther anyway. Ha ha!
Looking forward for your next fics!
Date: May 11, 2009 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
aye stupid merlin. his life and arthur's life at stake, and he couldn't so much as keep his mouth shut and head down. so what if the kid was being bullied a bit! some things are worth risking your life and some aren't because frankly people can take care of themselves too! does seem typical though.